Sunday, October 02, 2005

Dream sequence, continues...

...eyes swollen n empty, lips dry n chapped.
im still Asleep.
.
inconsequential thoughts prevail the mind.
world seems still Strange.
Headaches Remain.
.
inconsequential feelings Devour the heart, as...
it Sinks and Sulks.
.
they say; the world is the same,
they say; the life is same,
they say; everything is there in its place.
But,
Where am i?...
.
they dont answer.
n i dont know.
.
i do all chores, all day n lie on bed, all night.
.
i roam around the city,
all day all night,
randomly wondering,
through busy streets and empty alleys.
i Wonder alone.
.
i sink in my couch,
all day all night,
watching any scene that catches my eyes,
or reading any word that whispers in heart.
i Dream alone.
.
from here and there
i drift,
i glide,
where the wind takes me.
like a broken Feather...
i am everywhere, n
No where.
.
...i lost my bird
.
...i lost my will.
.
my will,
my love,
my passion,
my god,
my only sanity
...died its own death.
.
while i stood there and watched.
.
now, its an empty temple.
where the bhagats still sing,
and bells still ring,
but the diety has left.
.
i am Free...free as in all its sense.
.
i Dont wanna wake up.
i still Dream.
.
Insane, i Remain.
.
like my love, i expect this dream,
to make me sick
...so sick that it too,
dies its own death.
.
i want to see its limits,
Limits of my Insanity
..... in the hope
... of seeing god,
again.
.
Insane, i Remain.

15 comments:

AI said...

Careful of dropping comments on stranger's blogs flix...it can lead to disturbances in our hermit like existences ;)

Nice free verse, I like the catch-phrase: Insane, I remain...i'm going to borrow it.

Waqas said...

fear not, if you do, for sometimes stretching the limits is a necessary process, as is distancing oneself.

Phitaymaun said...

clustered thoughts ravage a lilac screen.
The effect on my conciousness is similar to the melancholy found at the bottom of a bottle of Everclear.
In the end, i don't know what mor eto marvel at... the potency of the spirit, the intoxication of the thoughts or the stupor induced in the end.
Insane, I remain...
Exceptional!

AJ said...

that is pretty nice.
There is no madness in reason
But in madness there is reason

S A J Shirazi said...

This just can't be insane, No.

sebia said...

o fishie,
hii,
frst of al happy ramadan 2 u,may in this month u find all the serenity u looking fr and find the connection with GOD which u ever seek fr:0
was reading u and ws thinking is it me or u who is writing all this stuff,strange that smbdy so far away can weave the words with the same wavelength s ours..strange but nice
eyes swollen n empty, lips dry n chapped.
im still Asleep.
.
inconsequential thoughts prevail the mind.
world seems still Strange.
Headaches Remain.
.
inconsequential feelings Devour the heart, as...
it Sinks and Sulks.
.
they say; the world is the same,
they say; the life is same,
they say; everything is there in its place.
But,
Where am i?...
simply exotic..fishie u gt the magic 2 bewitch all..
tc

flick said...

@ai:
:) thanx. its all yours.
(btw, :S dint get the disturbance part)

@vix:
your right. n you know what? i think its gonaa work :)

@beknighted:
:o ...thanks, it was nothing but a plain monologue.
im overwhelmed!
*blushes*

@vonaurum:
thank you :D

@shirazi:
hmmm...

@sebia:
:D hi sebs, good to see you here. im more amazed at the fact that how can two total strangers, with two different lives, could feel exactly the same range of emotions at the same moment in time.
your right, its strange but nice. :)
...to bewitch?...
:D
darling its not me, its just the plain truth, that casts its own spell.
it doesn need any fancy words, or intricate weavings.

reedemer_x said...

I'm back! Lets see how I write, its indeed sad what happened in Muzzafarabad, Islamabad etc. . .

Dawn said...

amazing is the word I could find after reading this poetry...it took me with so many faces of life...!! Superb flick!!

Thanks,

twice translated said...

looks like we've all taken a step back from blogging :( sadly, such things are necessary from time to time.

even if you're not writing your stories and poetry, live your stories and poetry :) take care--

Waqas said...

on a break? your writing is being missed

FM said...

Great going!. I am visiting your blog for the first time.

Why dont you take part in some competition ?..i have seen some ppl really good with these type of skills. It will be better if you take part in some competition...there are so many online ....

Keep it up :)

with regards
FM

sebia said...

fishie ,fishie,fishie fishie where r uuu;((((((i miss u sachi muchi..cm bak plsssssss

twice translated said...

:( haan yaara--come back, we miss youuuu! just a little something perhaps?

flick said...

sorry yara!
hv been going through really tough times, got my thesis at its crimax, n got so many otherthings to take care of, i dont even get the time to blog :(

but i will be back soon inshaAllah before the holiday season, hopefully.
i miss you all :|