something so sweet was coming to an end, i just wished i could hold on to it for a few more moments. i was scared. i knew its time was up. but u see i just dint want to let it go. it is so natural. isnt it? :)
now, its rise n shine! but the dream has left a smile on my lips. :) ... enough to last me through another day ;)
as i was going through it, i scribbled a few lines. they might sound sentimental, but that was the moment for it! :DD, n its just the whole truth of it. i cant help it. like it or not, iv gotta say it. 8)
kafoor khwaab
~^~
kal din cherdhey tak bister mein
nenoan ko meechey letee thee
...
kahin nenn khuley... tou nenoan se
na khwaab ka panchi urd jaye...
saanchi kirnoan ki aanch se na
kahin mann ka jhoota deep bujhey
...kahin yun na ho, k nenn khuley
nenn khuley...aur preet dhaley...
...
bas... iss der mein,
damm saadh k wo,
nenoan ko meechey letee thee,
dou band kivardhoan k neechey,
panchi ko bheenchey bethee thee.
_______________
_flick_7th july/2005
6 comments:
heh, how many times have i woken up thinking the same!
Not bad for an impartial person :)
WOW...I can relate so many times ..I had such situations..where u dont want to open ur eyes..so that ..thori der hee sahi..phir bhi..khawaab poora to ho :)
amazing..words...believe me ..I have often read urdu lafz...but here wha..qammal kar diya tusi..to gr8 ho ji daad kabool farmayein :)
& gal you rock with that punch line..."like it or not, iv gotta say it" ;) Jiyo!!!!
WOW
:D
vix:
yup same here, only that this time, it was for real . n i dreamt for months :)
redeemer_x:
thanks!...coming from a cynic, not bad! :)
dawn:
thank you for all the sweet words youve said. though i wrote it in a state of depression, but now i really feel better. thanks for listening.
:)
hiba:
thanks!:)
Very well written indeed. I really like the way you have said something is a very unique way.
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