Ive been in the process of waking up from a dream. While I was away, I scribbled a few lines, hope they make some sense.
_
Yen
*
Losing a Hold.....
Its Slipping Through
Hand,
Got Breaths on a String;
...a Silken Strand
*
So Close, So Far,
...a Fond Figure;
Like Melting Shadow
...on Misty
Mirror
*
Illusion, Mirage, or real
Ecs'tasy;
All Lanterns of
Yen,
All Glint of Glee.....
_ flick, /June 29, 2005
8 comments:
Illusion, Mirage, or real
Ecs'tasy;
All Lanterns of
Yen,
All Glint of Glee.....
WOW!!! I read these even before I read the first sentence of your post and was gonna ask u where did u get this from...but am amazed its ur own :) beautiful...
keep writing..:)
cheers!!!
thanks dear! your an angel! ;) you read it, u liked it, so as they say "paisa wasool!" :D lol.
btw, for me, the first two stanzas are about some illusive realities & lucid dreams. n the last one is their essence.
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Seems to me like ur fascinated by fantasies, daydreams. . .(no offence)
Too bad life isnt what we want it to be
read the post again. here i m not talking about living in a fantasy world, i have just pointed out some fragile realities of life.
but as far as dreams are concerned, life begins at a dream.
n yess i dream, n it isnt bad that life is not what i want it to be, its infact my real motivation, my inspiration. i dream to realize.
Life, well it does begin with dream(s) but slowly and surely, each dream fades away as you mature and realise the harsh facts of life. . .As I say, I`m a cynic posing as a realist while secretly an optomist. You dream to realize, now thats good. . .
hey dear...I went straight for the essence hehe...I know..I read the first two and then ...took a slow sip ..at the end..;)
am glad...U dream..as we all must..only then life has a new meaning..:) good luck & be happy ;) always!
well-written
tip: avoid the capitalizations of words (that are not proper nounse ofcourse) in the lines, for a more dramatic effect
:D
dawn:
i know you did, but i just wanted to make sure ;) :D
hiba:
thanks for the compliment & the tip too ;)
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