Sunday, April 17, 2005

vanishing potion

vanishin in to thin air;
tell me if theres a potion
ill turn in to dew drops
n merge in to the ocean
_flick_

4 comments:

Dawn said...

WOW! now thats positive thought..sorry am just reading each and jotting as I felt through!!!..

I liked this one the best;)
Keep it up!

flick said...

:D thankyou. im happy u liked it. n i appreciate the way youve commented, honestly :)

btw the three of these have the same mood,in time.a sequence of thoughts. starting from a simple wish.
I also like to keep my words simple, honest, n brief ,as they can be :)

Mohib said...

I assume that the first line is the title of the poem. Rest three are awesome !!

flick said...

thanx mohib! :)