I myself dont really know the truth of it,( or may be I dont wanna know). Still, this moment, I couldnt come up with any thing else, thats it, n thats all. I-)
theher gayee, samey k dhaaray per bohat be-rabt si ik saans, ...aur kuch taabeerein
the overall expression is good though.... can u grant me the copyrights ?? the first line is great i can come up with many versions keeping the first line as it is.
intense feeler: :)thanks! I guess. well if it were poetry for poetry's sake, or about coming up with a couple of fine beautiful rhyming words, it was quite easy, as its a very simple n smooth line :) id written many more on this theme, but dint publish them. so it wasnt the point :)
it was infact about what it meant to me. it was the truth of my moment, the way life has lost a pace... while times running out :)
btw this term/phrase "samay ka dhara" or "waqt ka dhara" has been used extensively in urdu literature. Ive been originally inspired by the great couplet, you must hv heard it, too: kaun tehrey samey k dharey per__ koh kia aur kia khas-o-khashaak intead of it, my concept is a contradiction, like an answer to this universal truth. so with the same phrase, you can say anything you like. Its all yours.
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hmmmm.
accha hai, accha hai !!
shukriye! [:">]
boss! islaah nai fermaiye ga? :D
neem hakim, khatra-e-jaan nahin suna hai??
;) kehney mein kia herj hai?
the overall expression is good though....
can u grant me the copyrights ??
the first line is great i can come up with many versions keeping the first line as it is.
intense feeler:
:)thanks! I guess. well if it were poetry for poetry's sake, or about coming up with a couple of fine beautiful rhyming words, it was quite easy, as its a very simple n smooth line :) id written many more on this theme, but dint publish them. so it wasnt the point :)
it was infact about what it meant to me. it was the truth of my moment, the way life has lost a pace... while times running out :)
btw this term/phrase "samay ka dhara" or "waqt ka dhara" has been used extensively in urdu literature. Ive been originally inspired by the great couplet, you must hv heard it, too:
kaun tehrey samey k dharey per__
koh kia aur kia khas-o-khashaak
intead of it, my concept is a contradiction, like an answer to this universal truth.
so with the same phrase, you can say anything you like. Its all yours.
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